I felt as though the Strategic Writing Assignment was an interesting assignment because I was able to create an original piece of persuasive writing. I chose to talk about supporting older youth in foster care. This topic really interests me because I was once a foster child. It’s heartbreaking to know that other kids are going through the same thing as I did. In this paper I talked about sex trafficking among foster kids and how Creative Community Services is raising money to build a home for aging out foster youth. Talking about this subject is important me because so many kids age out of foster care with no family, no safety net, and have very few life skills to live independently and safely.
I had a few grammatical errors, such as adding commas between sentences and bolding certain words. I also forgot to capitalize FOR MORE INFORMATION. After going back and reviewing my corrections, I was bale to make this paper so much better and professional looking.
Zoey Sosing 